first song ever written... need some constructive criticism.. pleasee

Verse 1
you say "i love you" before you close your phone
turn down the music, to make it seem like your at home
told her your tired and your gonna get to sleep
she knows your lyin and a tear runs down her cheek
Even though she knows all the wrong things you do
She cant let you go because shes so in love with you
but she refuses to stay inside and piss and moan
so she gets dressed up to have some fun of her own

BRIDGE 1
Her entire world
is with another girl
though she tries her feelings cannot be ignored
Through her eyes her heart begins to pour

CHORUS
He knows that she feels the pain
And like a scar it will forever remain
As the rain falls like teardrops in her eyes
Yet time will allow those tears to dry

Though its all his fault he’s the one to blame
It’s her up at 3 tormented by shame
Her faith in love is hidden behind lies
But the hardest part is saying goodbye

VERSE 2
Now she’s in a car, driving to god knows where
The feeling of revenge is strong throughout the air
it seems instantly her love for you is disappearing
though she's behind the wheel, anger does the steering
Part of her wants to crawl in bed
Then the image of you’re sinful smile appears in her head
As bad as she wants to, she refuses to go home
She keeps on driving, in desire of pleasure of her own

BRIDGE 2
Her hearts a mess
she’s filled with distress
but her anxiety is soon to be erased
as an unusual hand dries tears from her face

CHORUS
He knows that she feels the pain
And like a scar it will forever remain
As the rain falls like teardrops in her eyes
Yet time will allow those tears to dry

Though its all his fault he’s the one to blame
It’s her up at 3 tormented by shame
Her faith in love is hidden behind lies
But the hardest part is saying goodbye

VERSE 3
She wakes up the next morning and just begins to cry
Cuz even though she's not, she feels like the bad guy
Not remembering last night or what she did or said
Only can imagine, the rumors that will spread
Scrolling down her call log, she finds her babys name
Knowing after she confesses, Nothing will be the same
Shes talkin to her self, preparing what to say
While your going about your business like its just another day

BRIDGE 3
Her love for him
Is beginning to dim
as she stares at the sky
sorrow flows from her eyes
the beat of her heart is so profound
yet there’s no one nearby to hear the sound

CHORUS
He knows that she feels the pain
And like a scar it will forever remain
As the rain falls like teardrops in her eyes
Yet time will allow those tears to dry

Though its all his fault he’s the one to blame
It’s her up at 3 tormented by shame
Her faith in love is hidden behind lies
But the hardest part is saying goodbye

Outro